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Everytime I close my eyes I see you there
Staring back at me with that smirk of yours that I love so much
I never felt like this before and it's driving me crazy
You satisfy me in so many ways and it leaves me craving for more
This everlasting hunger for you keeps me up at night

Oh damn! They way you touch me drives me to pure ecstasy
Its to erotic for tv to see and I love it
Oh my love! Why do you tease me so?
This heart of mine can't take it

Baby your like a incubus and just love me all night long
I'm your personal slave; I'll do anything to please you
Please don't leave me like this! Your kisses bring me to my knees
I just love the way your cologne smells on you and rubs off on me
Oh you don't know the many things I want to do to you
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I might consider this a song. The chours is in the middle if it would be a song. I'm not really sure but I think it could be. I don't know yet but I have this really cool beat in my head for it though. But alas I am a writer not a composer. It's also about the one I love the most.

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I like it. It's not written in a conventional songwriting format.

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Thanks :)

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